This is the prompt for this week’s 100 word challenge. Your task is to use this prompt as inspiration to write 100 words. You might write a story, a diary entry, a report, a letter, a poem or in any other genre that you can think of.
Please post your entry in the comments section underneath this post.
Hint: It is always a good idea to write your work in a google doc and copy and paste your 100 words into the comment section. This way, you do not lose your work if there is a problem.
Mackenzie Falls
ReplyDeleteToday my family is going to an amazing waterfall called Mackenzie Falls. It is waterfall with alot of beautiful plants and creatures. Mackenzie Falls has a wonderful view of all the trees. At Mackenzie Falls the waterfall has a huge amount of water. At the moment I am at a rainforest called green rainforest, it’s right next to Mackenzie Falls but it’s really long walk. We still walked through green rainforest anyway. When we get to Mackenzie Falls I’m going take so many photos of all the pretty things I see. YAY we made it to Mackenzie Falls.
A great piece of writing Angela. I liked your description of Mackenzie Falls. Don't forget to be consistent with your tense. Keep up the good work! Regards Miss Lee
Delete100 WORD STORY
ReplyDeleteMy sister and I live in a poor village and a father passed away when we were both very young. But there is still one thing that brings us joy. It’s our favourite place in the whole world. “the water fall”. We give our pocket money in there to make wishes, and one day we know they will come true. We visit the waterfall after school every day it’s magical. When we are there there is no place we’d rather be. One day we took mother to the waterfall she made a wish to. It was a beautiful moment.
100 words- Emily B
Excellent work Emily! Your writing really draws the reader in "But there is still one thing that brings us joy." I felt like I was really at the waterfall. Please see me for a merit! Regards Miss Lee
DeleteBen and sally lived near a waterfall. they were very interested in it. It’s water flowed in a weird way and they believed that it had something hidden behind it. They don't know when the waterfall was created and they don't understand why they are so interested in it.
ReplyDeleteBen and sally were brother and sister and they didn't always agree with each other. They were both twelve years old and didn’t go to school they parents weren’t very rich and they had very little. One morning the waterfall disappeared forever, they were gobsmacked.
You had me engaged Matthew! I really want to know what happens next. What happened to the waterfall? Did Ben and Sally have an adventure. A lovely piece of writing. Don't forget to edit your writing for capital letters. Regards Miss Lee
DeleteThe crazy pig and the waterfall
ReplyDeleteOne day or should i say one dark dark night a pig was at the waterfall drinking water from a waterfall until it heard a little shake and a small boom so it hid in a bush it turned around and saw…… a bird. But that was not a normal bird it was a pigeon it swooped down to eat the pig and the a karate frog came out of nowhere and the evil pigeon got a lollipop but the lollie was to taste for him and killed it was very sad. THE END
A good start Matthew. I enjoyed your description of the explosion "a little shake and a small boom." Don't forget to proofread your work for CUPS. Regards Miss Lee
DeleteHi Viv here, I am hiding behind a waterfall and I have no idea why but all I know is that some kind of weird animal is chasing me and I ran away until I found this beautiful place full of waterfalls. The beautiful place I found has trees and grass surrounding it and some clear, blue, shiny waterfalls running down the rocks and guess what, it is a great hiding place to keep away from weird and wild animals chasing you, anyways back to the topic where I am
ReplyDeletedescribing the beautiful place I found in the middle of the jungle actually you know what I am going to call this place ‘The great hiding place I found in the middle of the jungle’, no too long how about ‘The waterfalls’, yes that’s a great name. Ummm anyway I love this place aka The Waterfalls because it is such a beautiful place it has lots of animals, they are so beautiful I especially love the blue flowing water it is so refreshing and there is some kind of a rocky bridge in the middle of the water so I can get to the other side, so see ya guys.
It was 200 words and I made a mistake so don't blame me.
DeleteA lovely story Vivian. You have used some great descriptive language "The beautiful place I found has trees and grass surrounding it and some clear blue shiny waterfalls running down the rocks." See if next week you can stick to the 100 word limit. Regards Miss Lee
DeleteThe night the cow died in the water fall
ReplyDeleteOne day or should I say one night there was a COW in a living water fall Dun Dun Daaaaaaaaa. But the cow was not an ordinary cow it was Jamie’s cow. Jamie was the king of Jamie landia he ruled the country with an iron fist because his fist came off fighting a lion. But the cow was not safe because the waterfall was alive. It looked like a normal waterfall but it wasn’t. No one has survived in that waterfall but the cow died it was sad.
The end
A funny story Jamie! You have put your sense of humour into your writing. I particularly liked the bit about Jamie ruling the country with an iron fist. Don't forget to make sure your ending make sense. Regards Miss Lee
DeleteThat girl
ReplyDeleteThere once was three girls and they were having a party, but they didn't have a place to go so they went in the bushes. 20hrs. later they was still there but they didn't know where they are and how they got they. They were still moving around and looking for the place to go and to get it of the place. They cut down a branch down and there was a gigantic fan at the back so the fan turned on and it was so strong that they couldn't hold on. It was a waterfall party.
Thanks for sharing your story Ashlia. I enjoyed the part about the gigantic fan. I wonder what happened after the fan was turned on? Regards Miss Lee
DeleteGreat work on your 100 word paragraph.
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ReplyDeleteDad and I went on a bushwalk in the amazon we saw leeches, butterflies and others I don’t need to mention. By the way my name is Eliza and my Dad’s name is Peter. When we were walking we saw a beautiful waterfall it had sparkling water flowing. At the bottom of the waterfall i washed my face because i had mud and dirt on my face dad also washed his face. Then we came across a puppy it was cute and had a golden coat so we took it through the amazon and took it home.
Sinead
A great story about Eliza's bushwalk with her dad. I liked your use of adjectives! Don't forget to edit for CUPS. Regards Miss Lee
Delete100 Word Challenge
ReplyDeleteHello, Tonight on Ten News. We will be discussing about a late and unusual attack on young child. Children have been disappearing near Danger Waterfall. Children aged around 3-9 have been the main victims for this attacks. The attacker have been seen multiple times, witness have described the attacker and the witness said “It looked like a green monster!”
It looks like the police is about to enter the Danger Waterfall. One of our news reporter is brave enough to go with the police, so he can give us a good idea what’s down the waterfall. The police is at the waterfall. We are talking to our news reporter, right now.
A fantastic News report Paul. I am really interested in finding out what happens. I definitely would not be changing the channel if I saw this on the television. Keep up the great work! Regards Miss Lee
Delete100 word challenge
ReplyDeleteSquish, squish, squish. Thats all I heard when my family and I cross the mud. we were going on a bushwalk than camping out in the wild for three days. I don’t want to be here. As I was grumbling, I tripped over a tree root and started tumbling down the hill. I was about to scream, but I couldn’t. I was amazed at the view. It was a beautiful waterfall with a valley of flowers. I could stay here all day. I heard my name being called. “ I’m coming!” I ran up the hill and smiled at my family.
Georgia
A great use of onomatopoeia at the start of your story. An excellent technique to give your story a sizzling start and engage your reader. Keep up the great work! Regards Miss Lee
Delete100 word challenge
ReplyDeletePippa was hiding in the wardrobe. A cockroach had been following her. Her heart beating so fast that it could just pop out at any moment. “Ouch!” she screamed and fell back, amazed to see an amazing waterfall.
“Wow”
“I know right, it’s beautiful” replied a little voice. Pippa turned around and was standing face to face with a giant wallaby.
“W-who are you?” Pippa stammered.
“I’m Wally, the wallaby” he answered proudly. “You’ve fell into the my beautiful waterfall”.
BOOM!
Pippa was in the wardrobe again. She slowly opened the door, and saw a cockroach staring at her.
“AAAHHH!”.
An imaginative story Clara! I particularly liked your language of description "Her heart beating so fast that it could just pop out at any moment." Regards Miss Lee
DeleteOnce, two men were on a bushwalk in Wonge Wonge. They were walking in the woods with really big trees. The two men were trying finding a waterfall that had a secret passage to batman’s cave. They kept walking into different places that they didn’t know of. They were like walking for hours which they have, then finally, they found the waterfall. There were a lot of algae everywhere, the water was flowing down the fall. The two man started to walk to the fall, they found a tunnel that could fit them. Then batman killed them in one second.
ReplyDeleteGreat work James! A very imaginative story- I could picture it in my mind "There were a lot of algae everywhere, the water was flowing down the fall." Make sure you end with a bang. Regards Miss Lee
DeleteOnce there was a waterfall who was all alone he had no one to talk to he wanted to move but he was stuck on the ground then one day a human girl came to see the waterfall the girl asked “why are you crying”the waterfall said”because i am always alone and I don’t like it it’s dark,scary and dark” Than the girl found somewhere to sit and said” ok I will sit with you Mr waterfall” the girl had a name her name was Ersa she said “I will come here every single day with you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this beautiful story about a lonely waterfall and a friendly girl Emily. I really liked the part about the waterfall being unable to move. Don't forget to edit for CUPS. Regards Miss Lee
DeleteThe New Discovery
ReplyDeleteThere is a new discovery that has been found. It is located near the amazon bush and is willing to be sold for 1 billion dollars. It has a lot of clean fresh water and has beautiful waterfalls and pretty flowers blooming in spring and no one could ask for more and also there is lots of rare fish and could not be found anywhere. But there is catch this place cannot be destroyed because this is a special gift that god gave us so as a respect you will not be able to chop down trees or anything related to that.
“Bang! Boom!” Sounds from the television scare me. Sleepily, I close my tired eyes. I wake up in the woods.” Where am I?” I scream nervously, “ HELP!”. I look around, at the thousands of trees surrounding me. “ Do you need help? You lost?” a lady asked me gently. “ Yes! .” I reply. The lady was wearing dirty clothes and her skin was wrinkled as if she had been in a swimming pool for too long She led me to her house.. “fetch me some water”.She pointed at the waterfall near by. I walked. The lady pushed me in the fountain.
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